Anyways I noticed I have posted in a while and I thought why not give you a little preview of the book I'm writing! It's the first Paragraph of the first chapter! Please tell me if Its any good. Remember it is copyrighted to me, so please dont try to copy any of my words. Thanks!
As you grow, you learn to accept the things around you. The people you grown up with or without affects your life entirely. At times you might question about your life, but in the end you just go with the flow. I never really questioned about my life and I guess that’s why I never bothered on wondering about how I got so gifted. No I don’t mean the usual being extremely smart and having a high IQ, far from that actually. I grew up having visions, yeah the typical seeing into the future. I have asked my adoptive parents once or twice on how was it possible that I’m able to see a movie of the future, but I always get these dull, corny answers. My dad would say “darling you’re my superhero,” or my mom would answer “Hun, your special,” really that worked when I was five. I’m 16 years old, and I want to know the truth. I’m not the only gifted person in the house, my biological brother Blaxton -who’s older than me by 2 years- has visions to, he sees the past, well I think you can still call them visions. It’s annoying at times when he gets an A in history and I come home with a D in my history class, well can you blame me, I’m more about the future type of girl.
NOTE THAT THIS HASNT BEEN EDITED!!
Sounds good so far :) hope all goes well with it.
ReplyDeleteHmmm, interesting! Definitely need to edit/proofread though. lol. Hey, can you blame me? I'm used to looking for subject-verb agreements, comma splices and fragments, misspellings, etc. ;) I'd be very curious to read where the story goes. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome Nadi! I agree with Professor lol. I can't wait until your book is finished =]
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